A Poem by Paege

I wrote this about my family but i want to know what other people think before i show it to them. I really want to impress them.


There are so many people in my life

They all have so many different names.

One that will always be is family.

My family, the large group that it is,

Uses their traits to help one another;

Being strong for life, and the ones they love,

Building a family, starting a new,

Praying for each other, wishing the best,

I love my family for this and more,

But their faith astounds me, it falters not.

They stand by their beliefs, never going to quit.

They know what is right and don't back down.

I am so proud of all my family.

It's hard to understand when you don't know

My family is the ones I love the most,

The ones I stick by and stick by me too.

The ones I can look to and never fear

My family is strong, faithfull, guiding.

But most of all they are always loving.

They will be with me for eternity

Forever living, part of my being

I hold them close and dear to my heart, always.

© 2010 Paege

Author's Note

Be harsh. Please. I really want this to stick out to my family. Does it? Or does it just seem like another poem out there?

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A very nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

An expression of pride in your family in well written poetic prose.
Something I dont often see from an adolescent. I think you have just about got yourself figured out. Stick with your feelings they are your best guide through the complexities of growing up.

Posted 12 Years Ago

yes this is good :) x

Posted 12 Years Ago

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I think this flows really well, it really shows how much you love your family. Great as usual from Paege

Posted 12 Years Ago

It's awesome. It flows almost perfectly, and the theme is astonishing. Love it. The fam will too. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on April 21, 2010
Last Updated on April 21, 2010



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