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You're My Fury

You're My Fury

A Poem by Karina Longo

I’m crawling back to the start

How could it all go wrong?

You’ve been so intimate to the fears

From when you were young

 

Walking through the streets from

All those postcards and dreams -

The night pours fast and it flashes

Right in front of our feet

 

And it’s so strange, strange

Strange, so strange

They say all things must pass

But how come you never change?

 

You’re my fury, you’re my fury

You’re my, my - all mine - what am I?

Dreaming a dream that will die

Hallucinating all my life

 

Reality breaks in just like the summer

We’re high, sunshine

© 2012 Karina Longo


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Karina Longo
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Those are some powerful lyrics :-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm loving this. Actually I'm messing around on my guitar right now to it;D. I'm liking a fast tempo.

Idk, I'd like to see a girl with a soul voice behind the vocals. Like Christina Grimmie...or Amy Lee, though I think she'd be too intense...meh.

Message me if you'd want to see it come to life?=) It'd be fun.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very cool words, love to hear them put to music...

Love is forever even when it has ended... it is tough to get over losing something like that.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This reminds me of the Coldplay song the Scientist.

You are very talented at Nostalgia.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've been so intimate to the fears
from when you were young.
A nice write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haunting love song.Nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good to be able to read your poetry. I hope all is well with your and life. Good description in the poem. I like the energy and the positive ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fine poem, like the hesitant, conversational style that the repeats evoke. especially at the start of the third verse, you write very well !

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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