Someone Else's Soul

Someone Else's Soul

A Poem by Karina Longo
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To my very special one.

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The night moves slowly, 

The moon shining closely, 

Through your brown sugar eyes

To my special delight, hitting in 

My haunted, fragile heart - which is yours to keep

Darkness dances and strips 
The howling, most lovely kiss 
I’m calling your name, I’m calling for you now
You’ve innocently bewitched me, with your sweet mystery
I’m destined to live and die for you, now

I close my eyes, here are your lips 
Moving my arms, touching your hips
God bless the purity, the beauty in you 
Our souls merge as one, you are me, I am you

You are my sweetest perfection, 
My life, my elation, I’d kill 
For this smile of yours 
That could light up all this whole messed up town

I love you, did you really ever thought 
That you’d mend someone’s heart 
And own someone else’s soul?
Well, yes, I love you, I do
Did you really ever thought 
That you’d kill the bad in me 
That you’d be someone else’s God
And someone else’s mind control?
(Yes, I love you)

© 2013 Karina Longo


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Nicely well written piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Karina Longo

2 Years Ago

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damn this has a ferocious passion, to be wanted so by a woman...what a lucky guy...beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Great write and enjoyable read...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful poem my friend so good to read

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a lovely love poem i like the last verse- I am sure your special someone loves this .

Posted 7 Years Ago


"I close my eyes, here are your lips
Moving my arms, touching your hips
God bless the purity, the beauty in you
Our souls merge as one, you are me, I am you"

Posted 7 Years Ago


I feel thought should be present tense. Did you ever really think? but other than that its beautiful:) Meeting people who are so purely beautiful is a rare find in life. I'm glad you took the time to share it with us

Posted 7 Years Ago


The verse starts slowly and picks up pace... the end stanza just takes this verse... you pour out the details within the lines...

Posted 7 Years Ago


You are extremely talented!

Posted 7 Years Ago


"Darkness dances and strips
The howling, most lovely kiss "
I like the way you describe the desire and movement of love. Love isn't easy. Love is a struggle to find peace and trying to accept it. I like the closure of the poem. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Karina Longo
Karina Longo

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