Sanitized

Sanitized

A Poem by Karina Longo

Out of my comfort zone,

Disintegrating

A solar dream, near their origami-made,

Ice thin standards

 

Out of breath, sinking in fresh air -

Freedom out of my cage,

It makes me feel like I am living

Someone else’s perfect dream

 

Kill her again, and again

So she will not feel like

Placing herself six feet under

 

Kill her again, and again

So she will fit in

This wonderful, sanitized disaster

 

Her black hair -

Already drowned

In her own

Insane wonders 

© 2014 Karina Longo


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Very creative and imaginative. Well Done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Karina Longo

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!
Three words came to my mind when I read this. Eccentric, creative and original. This is a fresh read for me. Possibly because it's How I write, let's just say similar style, haha, or maybe not. Either way I really like this piece. Good job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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very intriguing, like a late night beneath a yellow hue you tell us your world and your anger and fever and need for freedom.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the last stanza is great/

Posted 6 Years Ago


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wow, I don't even know what to say, I loved reading this!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Added on September 8, 2014
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Tags: girl, emotional, plath, chaos, crisis, interiors, sadness, truth, beauty, darkness

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Karina Longo
Karina Longo

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