Darlin', Smile!

Honey, you see,

feelings can't pile,

come out and shine,

darlin', smile!

Walk my way,

it's worthwhile,

it's you and me. So,

darlin', smile!

Pretty please,

I can't wait awhile,

yours is beautiful, so,

darlin', smile!

Those hazel eyes,

shine a mile,

breathtaking, so

darlin', smile!

Author's Note

I was listening to another song called Darlin'.
Obvious?
Don't judge, its not my best.

Reviews

[Knoxxeh]

May not be your best but jeez its still a great poem I envy your poetry talent danget haha great flow in this peice great job
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[LittleMadGirl]

It may not be your best, still it is a good read.
A nice message; something we should tell our loved ones all the time for their is no greater joy than seeing beautiful smiles. (: