A Poem by LivingDeath

Inspired by the picture, embodied by emotion.

She's got a heart
Of stardust galaxies
A part just like
Dark fallacies;
Reveries - I can't believe
It wont conceive
A hope to breed;
With marks that bleed
I won't concede
Embark my part,
My serenity.

© 2016 LivingDeath

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Very nice piece. I like the rhythm and the flow of it.

Posted 3 Years Ago

Beautiful; galloping within your lines for an exquisite tease and peaceful seduction. Adore the flow

Posted 4 Years Ago

Beautiful artwork and amazing description. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Words after my own heart... Love this! Your rhyme here is beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago

I can see where the picture inspired this write. You have a lot of good rhyming. Valentine

Posted 4 Years Ago

Reads almost like song lyrics from some psychedelic rock album. Think Porcupine Tree meets Tool.

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Added on December 12, 2016
Last Updated on December 12, 2016



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