I Thought You Were the One

I thought you were the one for me

to lift me off my feet

to love me till the end

into eternity.

 

I thought you were the one 

was this all for fun

did you really care

because I still think you're the  one.

 

I though you were the one 

but its really all the same

you were just another one 

to break my heart again.

Author's Note

She loves me and I love her I dont see why it has to end.

Reviews

[Rainey]

This rhymes very fluidly, and says so much. I've been in this situation before; not the best feeling :/
But great job on this one!

[deeps]

Love is rough sometimes it just stinks.
It will get better. I know you are probably tired of hearing that.
You will get you another girl one day.
You express yourself very well.

[Theresa]

You captured wondefully what so many teenagers as well as people go through. Unfortunatley sometimes loving someone isn't enough to keep you together.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

wow this has happened to me as well

[Your-Guardian-Angel-Wis..]

I Love You Tyler, And I'm Sure Things Will Work Out For You In The End, Because If Anyone Deserves Great Amounts Of Happiness It's You

[CircusNerd]

wow. i dunno what it is about being a teenager that makes us just have to go through effing hell til we get things right for once, but don't sweat it. things happen for a reason (btw i also liked this piece lots!)

[Coyote Poetry]

Love can twist us up. Alone we think about what we could of been. A sad poem about the education of love.
Coyote