I Cannot Fly

I Cannot Fly

A Poem by LivingDeath

I cannot fly with mangled wings

I cannot live from broken dreams,

I cannot see through tainted eyes

I cannot love through twisted lies.

© 2010 LivingDeath

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You left me in awe after reading this man.

Posted 10 Years Ago

good job! short but powerfull

Posted 11 Years Ago

I like it, very much so. It reminds me of so many moments in my life. Very well written, thank you.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Short and to the point and sometimes that is what makes a great poem. Strong meaning in only a few words. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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This is so amazing! Really simple, but it could tell a whole life story. Really great written!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Short, meaningful and powerful. Each line was profound. Another great write!!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Wow, I agree with Gregory. This is short, but it packs a HUGE punch. It kind of makes me just want to sit down and think of all the different ways I can associate it to so many different things. But I won't, because I need to comment.
This is so profound. I think this should be put in liquid form and dropped into the water of every country... so that maybe world leaders and other sometimes heartless individuals might gain some insight into human nature and how it is to simply -be- human, and how it is to want to live but not be able to.
Great write! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago

Short...but thought provoking and very true...Very good write...


As Always,

Posted 11 Years Ago

one simmple word

Posted 11 Years Ago

Short but strong! I like it...

Posted 11 Years Ago

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