I Cannot Fly

I Cannot Fly

A Poem by LivingDeath

I cannot fly with mangled wings

I cannot live from broken dreams,

I cannot see through tainted eyes

I cannot love through twisted lies.

© 2010 LivingDeath


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This was great :D
Short, yet packed with a punch.
Well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Every line tugs at the strings of the hearts.

Posted 11 Years Ago


oh I love this! so short but it is still meaningful and beautiful i think.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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bre
I love short poems
the words mean a lot more
and pack a harder punch
i also love poems with true and deep meanings.
nice write

bre

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh wow, this poem says A LOT even though it's just in four lines...
Four small lines... Many big ideas... Amazing and VERY VERY true. 10/10

Posted 11 Years Ago


very amazing doesnt matter if it was short or not understanding very clear

Posted 11 Years Ago


short, to the point and true. short and yet brilliant

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is amazing. Short but says alot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


with four lines you have shown you have been through pain. and its very intricate how you think. i really enjoy how you write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


To me, the person in this poem is trying desperately to convince themselves that they cannot do those various things, that they are unacceptable. Whether or not they succeed, remains to be seen. However, I could really feel the conviction and the meaning behind such few words. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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LivingDeath

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