I Cannot Fly

I Cannot Fly

A Poem by LivingDeath

I cannot fly with mangled wings

I cannot live from broken dreams,

I cannot see through tainted eyes

I cannot love through twisted lies.

© 2010 LivingDeath


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Mmm, very nice. So much said in so few words. Wonderful job!!!

Heather

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is so deep and meaningful, like it hits a chord in you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


To the point. Simple rules we need to live by. A excellent poem. I can't stand liars. No excuse for not telling the truth. We can't allow the world to ties us down, Need to be able to dream and see the world clear.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Short. Sweet. And to the point. An excellent poem, flow and rhyme was perfectly set, and the emotion you have managed to project from those few words is astonishing. Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


short but effective

love this, at the end of each line i would pause to think about what i just read.
overall, written well, love that it was thought-provoking for me, great flow
good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


This has such a beautiful tone. Short but every words rings soo true. You have great talent.

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is amazing and so true... i love this .... you have a beautiful talent

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow this is so powerful and true. I really like this poem. It's amazing. Well done=)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very short, but very beautiful, and very true. Also very sad, but that's inevitable with your poetry. (No offense) Fantastic job, love. ♥
~Blessed Be~

Posted 11 Years Ago


Isn't this the truth. There are some that just can't see this either. I thought this was brillant. Such an amazing flow of words too.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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LivingDeath

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