True Friendships

True Friendships

A Poem by LivingDeath

Hard times won't last forever
but true friendships always will,
making memories along the way
conquering the steepest hill.

True frienships don't come easy
they're very rare to find,
but when you do your heart's reborn
it's truly one of a kind.

They'll help you along the way
through the up's and down's,
they'll keep a smile on your face
and wipe away your frowns.

You might hit a couple bumps
and see the other way,
but that's the things that true friends do
they'll come back no matter what you say.

They'll see you to the very end
and all the spots between,
you'll share so many memories
you'll be the unstoppable team.

© 2010 LivingDeath


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Oh I loved this .. from the writing to one of the most adorable photos I have ever seen that is so full of life that brings me back to my own childhood. The rhythm, rhyme and flow was really great.. the message is timeless and where true friendship should be! If this was written for the friendship of that between these two boys.. what a wonderful thing to be friends for so many years and not let it go through the good and bad!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is a happy poem! and I LOVE finding "true friendships" NICE

Posted 10 Years Ago


I loved it. It is true that true friendships are hard to come by. I only believe that I have only a few. A lot of my friends love me, but only some of them comfort me. I know that sounds wrong, but its true. Thanks for sharing it with me. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


True that, true that :) this was very sweet, and soft and i like the way you put friendship.

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is soooooooo true this is another work of art by you... great work

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I really like this poem because i've recently lost a person who i thought was a friend, this poem makes me realize she was never a true friend, and thats what makes me sad. nice write and nice picture, i think most people would have chosen one with two little girls, but i like that it's two little boys, lol

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Posted 10 Years Ago


This was such a beautiful poem and so true. When you meet a true friend hold onto to them forever and don't let them go. They are turely hard to find. Well done=)

Posted 10 Years Ago


True friends are hard to find but when you do they will be apart of you forever. This is a beautiful piece that really shows the meaning of a true friend. Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cute!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awesome! Magnifying the one sweet truth of life. Yes they are there...they are always there...:) To accentuate the beauty of our often messed up lives, and can there be anything more satisfying and relieving?
Kudos on the lovely poem...I'd so much understand how important this is since I'm exactly your age:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is very true and done wonderfully,I like this lots :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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LivingDeath

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