Ask For Your Hand

When I come back
I'll ask you for your hand,
Till death do us part
I'll be your loving man.

I've never felt this way before
This love I feel for you,
Tomorrow never came for us
But forever will start new.

I hate this sad prediciment 
Of me getting moved out here,
But remember me and I'll be back
Embracing you close my dear.

I love you more then words can say
And more then I can show,
Believe me when I tell you
I'll travel as far as I need to go.

I'll walk across the desert 
And swim across the sea,
To end up at your doorstep
And let our love be free.

When I come back
I'll ask you for your hand,
Till death do us part
I'll be your loving man.

Reviews

[Katie]

So romantic and sweet, I love any write that oozes such affection. Great job!

[lindsay]

I think I was smiling the whole way through and holding back tears. Tears of happiness,sheer happiness. This is such a gentle little poem I would like to carry with me. I love you work, great job.

[YourXArtist]

wow. this is really good, and sweet :)

[Missing Part]

This is very sweet. I love you

[Kayla_May]

i like this =]

[Liz Alexander]

So Romantic.

[Abhinav]

romantic stuff this, really romantic......the rhyming was good as always and the flow of the poem was great throughout
an excellent poem, enjoyable and full of emotions and an element of sweetness
needless to say, I LOVED IT:)))

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. Marriage should be a lifetime. I like the story and the ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Alex W]

Not my style of topic, but it reads very well. Kudos :-)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I enjoyed this. It was adorable, sweet, and cute. I loved it. Thanks for sharing.