Ask For Your Hand

When I come back
I'll ask you for your hand,
Till death do us part
I'll be your loving man.

I've never felt this way before
This love I feel for you,
Tomorrow never came for us
But forever will start new.

I hate this sad prediciment 
Of me getting moved out here,
But remember me and I'll be back
Embracing you close my dear.

I love you more then words can say
And more then I can show,
Believe me when I tell you
I'll travel as far as I need to go.

I'll walk across the desert 
And swim across the sea,
To end up at your doorstep
And let our love be free.

When I come back
I'll ask you for your hand,
Till death do us part
I'll be your loving man.

Reviews

[Tainted Devotion]

This is very sweet and just downright romantic. I love this poem. Absolutely love it. :)

[Katie Louise Hughes]

This one just sang to me. I can definitely see this as a song. You have a gift of making words rhyme so easily and without one easily noticing. Thanks!! Great job. :)

[Vanessa Macanas]

This was very well written. Great flow and use of words. This was touching and full of emotion and tells how much you must love her. She is very lucky! Great work lkeep it up!

[biggle]

:) i like it.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

another sweet poem from you, i love your poetry it all contains so much emotion, i like it:)

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

This so fantastic!
It's soft and heartwarming!
Great write.

-Elissa :D