Missing You

Missing You

A Poem by LivingDeath

I miss you more then words can say 
and more then I can show,
half way across this lonesome planet
I'm wishing I could go.

Go to where I first met you
to feel your warm embrace,
to hold you in my open arms
and talk to you face to face.

Hear your words that make me smile 
and the jokes that make me laugh,
with the things we share in common 
it's like you're my other half.

I miss you more then I can show
and more then these words can say,
I can't wait to see your face again
I'll be back for you one day.

© 2010 LivingDeath


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This was very beautiful. I like the powerful feeling of love in this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


what a beautiful poem of longing and of holding on to love's memory.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love the ending it brings it all together. It's sweet, heartfelt and really conveys how much you truly miss this person. Another beautiful piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awe this was adorable. I liked it a lot. It shows a lot of love for the girl. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


beautiful:) the flow into the rest of the poem was swift, and its very relate-able. especially for me, my bf lives an hour and a half away from me :'(

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love this. The flow was absolutly perfect. Nothing seemed forced, nice job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is a good poem. we just have to be pacient one day it will be the same as it once was.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I have felt that way about someone when they left around the world. It brings tears to my eyes thinking bout it

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's great, thanks for the read! :) Keep up the writing!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a great and simple poem. such strong feelings and sentiments. The subject of this poem is very lucky.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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LivingDeath
LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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