Missing You

Missing You

A Poem by LivingDeath

I miss you more then words can say 
and more then I can show,
half way across this lonesome planet
I'm wishing I could go.

Go to where I first met you
to feel your warm embrace,
to hold you in my open arms
and talk to you face to face.

Hear your words that make me smile 
and the jokes that make me laugh,
with the things we share in common 
it's like you're my other half.

I miss you more then I can show
and more then these words can say,
I can't wait to see your face again
I'll be back for you one day.

© 2010 LivingDeath


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Great Poem. Its sweet(:

Posted 10 Years Ago


very nice and simple. i can feel it, well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


i like this , the ending is very good

Posted 10 Years Ago


i really liked this! the flow was good, though in different stanzas it was different, it worked. the idea was nice. i thought you could have used a little more anger in this one.
The last line i think, was the perfect ending. the determination literally pounced out at me! it was overall, a really really good write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a beautiful, bittersweet write, taking us over time and those miles that separate you from your soulmate... Wonderful form and flow, your last lines share the hope of that meeting again one day...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nicely done, this is a very good poem. It's deeply romantic and yet kind of depressing. I love the rhyme and the story in the poem. Very good.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A very good poem. Separation create more desire and need. I like the story and the ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago



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LivingDeath
LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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