Hesitation Proclamation

There is some hesitation 

when you speak your proclamation,

of love that shows confusion

was this just a dreamed illusion.

We have such possibilities

not stopped by our inabilities,

we love with such intensity

not shunned from things not meant to be.

So don't let this end inferior 

for our love has grown superior,

I can't just wait nearby

so please don't say that last goodbye.

Author's Note

I think the last word in the last stanza is the biggest.

Reviews

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. Bringing out that insecurity, one growing closer while the other may drift away. Priceless.

[Keevan]

i fell in love with this. especially the end. i love your poems :)

[Undying Glory]

now that you mention it, yep that last word is the biggest. overall i love this poem, especially those last two stanzas. good job

[Tainted Devotion]

I agree that good byes can be the hardest thing to do. I love the second and last stanza the most, for the flow and rhyme worked out quite well.

[Lilly]

You make a very good point in your authors statement - 'goodbyes' can be the hardest thing
lovely poem

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I think so too. A very nice write. I like the opposite words you used.
It is so emotional .. very enjoyable.

Chloe