Written While High

Written While High

A Poem by LivingDeath
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The world of music, high... I was listening to my music after i got completely ripped, and I went places with it.. And with each song, a different place and feeling. It was like I was actually there.

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Floating down a small tropical channel
a Chinese river man plays to me, 
through the Egyptian trials
of this sitar thing.

     -SILENCE-

Riding on a wild rhino 
through African bush I go,
zebra's on our tail
when I land in a raving bar.

     -SILENCE- 

Coasting through Chicago roads
through the black abyss,
running from the lights of home
screaming 18 and life to go. 

     -SILENCE-

Through the Canadian trailer parks
to jump in raging water,
in the kayak I scream down
on the beach I blare my skill.

     -SILENCE-

In a London country home 
three rodents sing to me,
fucked on coke and helium 
through the snow they sing.

     -SILENCE-

Running through the Scottish fields 
my hand in the cookie jar,
the millers daughter standing there
laughing while I run.

     -SILENCE-

Beaming down a California boardwalk
a 40 in my hand,
cali girls hit the bong
as we ride off into tomorrow.
     -SILENCE-

© 2010 LivingDeath


Author's Note

LivingDeath
I don't want anyone telling me not to smoke pot. If you don't like it, fine, then don't do it.. But don't be telling me how to live my life. Because I will tell you when 420 comes around each year, thats the best fuckin day of my life!!

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This was interesting to read, i like the structure. Very amusing, great write :) 420!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Keep doing what you love. Great poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Keep smoking pot! :D
(Hahaha, that sounds so weird.)

Posted 10 Years Ago


O WOW GURLIE WAY TO PUT IT OUT THERE BUT CAN I TELL U THIS AS A DEAR FRAN I LUV TOTALKT O dont take away ur life because i luv talking to u and u have a true talent dont slip away luv yay

Posted 10 Years Ago


You bring the reader on a journey and that's awesome and what's even better is we are seeing it as you imagined it. Which only gives us insight into what was going through your mind at the time. Creative and enjoyable. I also love the picture that accompanies it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I think this was a good poem. I like it. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


great imagination!

Posted 10 Years Ago


It good and bad to all actions. Native Americans use weed to heal and assist in vision quest. Like all thing be careful. Too much of a good thing may blind you from the real world. I done some crazy things in my time. It open doors to write books and see the world with different eyes. I like this poem. A nice way to travel.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


keep smoking the weed! this was great! i love the repetition of SILENCE, really creative and it grabbed my attention.

Posted 10 Years Ago


pot for the win.Great write

Posted 10 Years Ago


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