I Sit I Cry

I Sit I Cry

A Poem by LivingDeath
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To that someone close that died the other day. I'll always remember you.

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Hold me down
my wings they cry,
I beg for you
to let me fly.

These dark bars
that hide all hope,
they hold me back
like unbreakable rope.

Give me peace
take my love,
I'm here below 
while you're above.

In the clouds
of heaven sky,
while you look down
I sit I cry.

© 2010 LivingDeath


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aww i love this. thanks for entering my contest

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awe I love this, great emotion. Keep up the great work *hugs* (haha sorry I like hugging people)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful. Everytime I read something of yours I think 'Theres no way he could write something better than this!' And then you prove me wrong over, and over again.

100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


Keep emoting, keep writing, you are gifted.
~!♥~

Posted 10 Years Ago


Simply powerful

Posted 10 Years Ago


The imagery was very nicely done....

In the clouds
of heaven sky,
while you look down
I sit I cry.

very touching, great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I think this is amazing. I love the flow it work out perfectly. I agree with Guitar Girl. She is absolutely right. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dude this is really good. Couldn't be any better. It's also a good way of saying you'l remember someone.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brought a tear to my since it hit close to home for me. I loved the last stanza and it makes me think if they are looking down on us would they want us to be crying? Another great piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ah, this really hit home for me. I just lost a close friend due to cancer. This was beautiful piece. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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