Tears They Fall

Tears They Fall

A Poem by LivingDeath

The sun has set 
and will not rise,
these tears they fall
from blood shot eyes.

The frost has come
turned warm to cold,
the glimmering grass
and memories we hold.

Darkness surrounds
all that remains,
from smiles we shared
to cries of pain.

No stars will shine
the black abyss,
this is the end
I miss I miss.

© 2010 LivingDeath


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I love this poem. It was extremely powerful and very well written. I love the flow of all the poems I've ever read by you. They are all emotional, but I do love this one. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


It is so powerful like many of your writings. I really don't know what else to say. I love all of yours that I have read. Keep on sending them!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was supurbly writtina nd the material drawing..Keep them coming..Kathie

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Another awesome poem with great flow and deep meaning.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ha I love this! It flows so amazingly and I love the rhyme. Excellent job done :)


-Blue

Posted 9 Years Ago


Another great poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


lost hope
displaced faith
depth in darkness

Posted 9 Years Ago


good flow, well done and i agree with coyote that is my fav. lines too.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The poem is beautiful and sad. I like the words and story in your words.
"Darkness surrounds
all that remains,"
A very good ending to a excellent poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago


Very saddening and depressing. But it's written beautifully all the more. The flow and rhyme scheme work together in perfect union, without any sort of strain or conflict. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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