A Fallen Heroine

A Fallen Heroine

A Poem by LivingDeath
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Dedicated to an amazing friend <3

"
I have a friend who calls herself
a fallen heroine,
though we haven't talked that much
I'm the happiest ever been.
This poems for for her 
yeah just for fun,
she makes me laugh 
but I'm not done.
Her hearts pure gold 
and filled with care,
a friend like her 
is very rare. 
So here's to you 
I thank you friend,
now I know
I can depend.

© 2011 LivingDeath


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Aww, a poem dedication, thank you my friend :D
I liked the flow, it's fantastic, it rhymes and I like how it's sewed :D
You left me with a feeling of being loved, and tears ran down my cheeks, it hits me hard to read it :')

You're an amazing friend!! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.




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True friends are rare in a lifetime..so cherish this one sweetie..Valentine

Posted 10 Years Ago


very nice and sweet

Posted 11 Years Ago


Love this piece of writing.It flows together well and you kept it short,sweet and simple which made it all the better. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very touching and affectionate. Even though the words were few and the piece short; It doe snot take away from the emotion value or the depth.

The last pulls it all together, great job and keep it up.

Vinny~ :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Really loved this, it was such a sweet sweet poem. I've not read anything of yours that actually told me that you were feeling happy for once. I didn't mean for that to sound bad at all, so I apologize if it did. You are truly an amazing writer. Keep at it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


How nice of you to write a poem for your friend. It was very sweet. Your rhyming was good and it flowed well. This was a good poem. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


that is really good tyler

Posted 11 Years Ago


A sweet dedication. Friends are the best gift from the GOD, in our life time. TO understand them and being a good friend for them is the best thing we can do in this life. Friendship is not only a dedication, it's growing up with the all sweetness it has. Fights,care, loving, everything is there, where we cannot find those feelings anywhere.....

Nice poem for the innocent dedication. Love this so much........

Posted 11 Years Ago


Such a very lovely dedication to your friend! Well done. Keep on penning.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a very sweet poem...simple, yet elegant, it really is great! It flows perfectly and is a beautiful dedication to a friend who I'm sure is very happy...great work! = ]

Posted 11 Years Ago



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LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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"I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not." ~Kurt Cobain. Wasssup guys! I am me, if you want my name, ask me for it. Life in every breath, is my motto. 22 years old, living .. more..

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