Kill Me Please, Kill Me Now

Kill Me Please, Kill Me Now

A Poem by LivingDeath

Don't feed me lines of empty truth
the lies that poison ears of youth,
you play the heart that loved you true
and now whats next is all for you. 

You fed me lies like truth was wrong
not one day passed, you don't belong, 
why I stay? I do not know
never will my heart be whole. 

Kill me, kill me, kill me please
thats all I ask, I want release,
kill me, kill me, kill me now
if you wont, I'll show you how. 

Take that knife and slit my throat
watch it bleed and watch me choke,
I'm done with life and all you're s**t
once I die you wont be missed.

You left behind a broken heart
and memories I wish were true,
I never wanted memories
I only wanted you. 

© 2011 LivingDeath


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Wow, really great. So sweet yet heartbreaking. You write some really powerful poems my friend, I love them! Amazing job here :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very very interesting, I love the poems that show deep emotions.

Posted 12 Years Ago


emotional and yet there seems to be more to these feelings for this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such an emotional poem but i love it, it just does explain how i feel, and reading poems thet people have written really helps me to think about things, thanks :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


huh, interesting poem, very angry, almost grudgingly so. i could almost hear you saying it, just makes me wonder where you get these ideas and who theyre for.
cheers
Drey

Posted 12 Years Ago


So nice and deep emotions :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hope you ain't thinking of dying, if so, get help man. Okay the poem was good, a bit rough with the vocabulary though.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The last line makes it all true...This is astounding, the words are beautiful. It's amazing how memories will always remain, even though they were lies, the so called thing we rely on is the actual lie, rather than our source of happiness.
Nice write, really loved this one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The relation between this poem and myself is strong, much more stronger for you however because you are the one who wrote such a fine piece of work. Though I may seem not the type, I am here if you ever need me, even though you don't know me. I hope all will end up well, and the pain washes away alast. I wish you the best!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very well written LD...
Are you ok?
I'm here if you need to talk!!

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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