Colors

I am soft, fluffy and smooth

As pure as a newborns cry

I am White.

 

I am burning, hot as the sun

Filled with passion, filled with anger

I am Red.

 

I am chilled, hard and cold

Forever sad and numb

I am Blue.

 

I am happy, shining brightly

Joy is in every part of me

I am Yellow.

 

I am nauseous, head spinning round

Envy drips in all my thoughts

I am Green.

 

I am everything all at once

Darkness is all I am

I am Black.

Reviews

[AcasualPawn]

Black black black


Intriguing poem athena

[Franky]

This is such a good write to talk about all of our mood changes and how dramatic there are. Well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of words and thoughts.
"I am everything all at once
Darkness is all I am
I am Black."
Each of us. All colors. Life make us know light and the darkness. Thank you Athena for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Ethan]

Poems about colors have become a bit of a literary cliche, but I must say you did a very nice job. You do need to include oxford commas here and there, though. Other than that, great writing.

[Minerva]

I am AWFUL with grammar. But thank you :)

[Ah'sunaM]

Black is beauty and its a beautiful poem