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I'm new to this game and don't know what to say

I used to write poetry but not everyday

I have a beautiful family with a husband and 5 kids

I wouldn't change any of them no matter what gives

They make me tick, they make me tock

Without them life would feel like a broken clock

They are all the love of my lives in one way or another

My daughters, my sons and my one and only lover

I will always do what I can for them no matter what it takes

They are my number one regardless how high the stakes

I will love them til the end of time

Because they are, have been and will always be mine!

Reviews

[River Page]

This is really cute. I think its great that you can rhyme, because I can't. Nice work. I wish my mom would write poetry....

[Shadey Jadey]

This is such a happy uplifting poem about the things that really matter in life. Well done xD

[KAOlmsted]

It's like the literary version of the Partridge Family xD

Nice job. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Be myself!]

good job

[icelandicblue]

This is a beautiful rendition of family. Family is the basis for all to come. I like your poem very much.

[Richard Man]

This is a great declaration of love, of loyalty and respect. Your strength is your family. I am a family man.... and a grandfather... I can relate to this deeply. Thanks.

[Me]

Thank you. Yes, my family is my strength.

[Night]

I don't think I ever met a family of poets before...this is a first...welcome to WC. Nice write by the way...Good job mom...=)

[Me]

Thank you. I didn't realize it would happen but it's great.

[quinfinn]

your love is truly strong. you have made a commitment to it and all in true measure. a life time you may treasure....wonderful write!

[Me]

Thank you.

[quinfinn]

welcome

[Frieda P]

Wow, 5 kids, and I thought I was nutters with 3 sons. You probably need a hobby stronger than writing poetry, ha, kidding... Nice tribute to the family. Welcome to WC.

[Me]

The kids all keep me busy enough. I don't think I would have any time for another hobby...lol. Thank you.

[Baby Ricochet]

5 kids eh? Between you, the kids and the husband you're one short for a fire team. Really sweet mom poem. It's a nice change from some of the "I'm a teenaged suicidal genius" and the bad erotica we get on here. You should definitely write another one.
I'd read it

[Me]

I'll have to keep that in mind with all of the guns in our house...:) Thank you. I have lots of poems that I have written in the past that I may have to share on here and no, they're not suicidal...lol. I will be writing some more. I just wrote that on the spur of the moment. I miss writing.