Pencil on paper                    (added stuff)

Pencil on paper (added stuff)

A Story by Cherie Paregrine Isis
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About a young lady who tries to write but every time she does she switches places with her character,who is a demon and is suppose kill an angel,but when the switch happens the plot changes!

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Millie woke up,with the dreaded thought crossing her head again,''I'll never get the book done!I'll get hunted down and every thing gained will be lost!''She jumped up,causing her two cats to jump with her,not knowing what the hell is going on.''I got to get the story done!''Millie stated standing up,she crossed her arms over her very flat chest and took a huge huff. ''Thats it self I'm going in!''She heard a small concerned 'mewing ' below her feet,Millie looked down to see her two kittens looking up at her like she'd gone mental,''Maybe I have gone insane but that just shows how mush I'm a genius!And that I'm alive!''Announced to her cats.Still replying with concerned 'mewing' Millie gave up,she walked over to her desk and got her papers.Yanning,still in zombie-sleep mode she got her jacket and wallet.''I'll be back when I've got three chapters!'' and with that she closed the door and stepped in the chilly night.She walked with her usual bounce to a rhythmical swing.Finally arriving to her car,she opened the blue care door of her old ''Bug'' car,and stepped in.When she finally coaxed the car to life with small soft warming promises that it will get a new dash board and an oil change,it sprang to life with out trouble.Like all the spunk had never left.Millie shaking her head at the promises realizing the costs sighed and pulled out.Hopefully the book would get finished and she would have enough money to give her car the tender-love-and-care it needed.Millie piled the pencil and paper on the sorry looking dash board,she so overly bruised.''Well I hope Link is working his shift tonight Zelda,don't you?''Millie asked her car,  (it was just like her cats) questioning her sanity.She hoped her favorite Cafe-tender was on his shift.Millie tried not pick favorites when it comes down to life savers like Link, but she could not help it!Link was just ''her cup-of-tea'' as he puts it,He adores her too and said that she was his favorite costumer,but he still is adenoid with the nick-name she had gave him two years ago,he has learned that it was  not about to go a-way.She first meet Nick,when she was driving in the late hours of the night,she had pop-ed her tire and drove to,on what seemed like a cross between a house and an storage
place.But being full of hope (and other things) she knocked on the strange structure to find that this wounder-less glory was not a house,but an Cafe!That just happens to be open 24/6.She felt love right a-way and thous begun her strange new schedule of going to 'THE EVERYTHING AND ANYTIME CAFE'.She smiled as she slowly eased in-to the all-to filmier parking
spot,that was ''claimed'' her's by every one.Millie got out and skipped to the other side to get the pencil and paper,then locking the car doors,Millie faced the chilly night and entered her favorite spot in town yet.''Hey Mills how are you?I was wondering when you'll show up!''A deep voice called to her as she stepped in-to the Cafe.''Yeah its felt like for-ever since I've been here last!''Millie chuckled at the commitment she made,for it was only two days ago she came in around two-thirty AM,''Millie!How are you?Let me guess the usual?''Said an young voice,Millie turned around and saw Link she smiled and went up and hugged him.''I'm ok,just need to finish the dam book!' she said sighing,and released Link.''Well I see you guys are busy!''Millie added,smiling maybe she could help and get some ideas by that.Walking over to the ''Bar'' counter(it just was the place were the coffee is made and there is a place to sit all around it,they really don't serve any thing bear or wine.) pulling out her pencil and paper she pushed back her hair,the long,wavy white-blond hair was some times a hassle,but she managed and pulled it back behind her shoulders.''Here is you're hot chocolate-vanilla-crazy-something random added-to-it drink,and you're big cookie.'' Link smiled and gave Millie another hug.He did that a-lot to her,once she asked him and he said he loved the way he felt when he hugged her,it was as if she was a fluffy little angel fallen form the sky.'You really are some-thing' he said once.Millie smiled and added ''Thank you!'' and went off to try and work.Millie felt commotion a-rise and decreasing around her,as the sun started to hit the sky.Finally giving up and having a huge major head ace that came hitting her like a death-train,she drained the fourth cup of her drink,and sat it down.Feeling some one sit down next to her the air  swooping down She looked up to see who it was,and saw that is was Link smiling like no-bodies business,Millie knew he had some thing he was waiting to ask her.His grin was about the size of soccer-ball,well foot-ball for you American's who don't know the original name.''OK what is it Link?'' she asked,feeling very anxious,he had something up his sleeve,and was holing it back making her wait,and that drove her crazy.Link smiled and started slowly,''Well I was looking on the internet yesterday.''He looked to her again and licked his lips slowly,Millie sighed a-little,knowing he indeed was going to make her wait for his point to be made. ''OK so you went on the internet,what did you find?Oh do I even what to know what you were doing?'' she said with a small giggle.Link looked a-way and then said,''Well i found this one site and it had concert dates!'',pausing again,he looked back to her.''Well that is cool!could you give me the site?'' she said,Millie could tell this was not what he was exited about,what he was keeping from her.''OK well our favorite band is coming here!In a week!''Link had jumped up and landed in front of me,grinning again,''OH my GOD!'' Millie felt so exited,''No way!here?holy cheeses!'' she cried,her brain was tiring to get the whole concept of what was happing,but she was starting to feel a-little sleepy and need another of her bizarre coffee right about now.''I got two tickets!too'' Link suddenly added,his gaze was intent watching her every move,Millie looked back to him,after spinning on the chair doing her happy dance,that was a mix between the chicken dance,the wheel chair dance and a bundle of the 80's dance moves.''Wow you got tickets?how much are they?Hopefully i can get them and we could meet up there!''Millie was now her self grinning like its 2012 and her last wish was to die smiling.''Millie some times you can be the most half brained girl in this town,even more half brained then half brain Jessy!'' Link said to me,with his voice hinting having been injured.''What do you mean Link?'' she said,her face fell and the grin was disappearing slowly like the morning dew,slowly dripping down to the hard brow ground,and giving it the watery goodness.''Ok I'm going to put it in the most simplest terms yet.'' agravetion showing thru his calm blank face,he seemed in shock that she had not understood yet,nor got that he was asking her to go with him.Sighing Link looked in-to Millie's foggy eyes,''I got two tickets.'' he said again,more slowly again.Millie looked back at him,her face scrunching up in confusion.''Um OK?Who are you tacking along?''Millie asked,she could not recall any names he said,''Mills I'm asking YOU to come with me to the concert!''Link finally blew out,he sighed and softly smacked Millie's head.'Jess for a writer who is sopuse to ''paint''a picture of the scene for the reader,you miss a lot of clues in life some times.,he chuckled lightly,and smiled again.''So will you go with me on a date to our favorite band?''Link said smiling and relaxed,he sat back down next to me.''Um you're asking me out?'' she said,stated to obvious,''O-k,I really want to go!Just the book...'' she left that thought hanging in the air like humidity.''OK!well get that book done!I know its going to be great either way!''Link said excitedly,and leaped up he got his note book out and gave her a quick hug and went to go serve coffee.

© 2010 Cherie Paregrine Isis


Author's Note

Cherie Paregrine Isis
still adding to it,but so far what do you guys think?
added a-lot!Nearly done with it,actually I'm going to make this a short chapter book!I love the charterers so go to my profile thing and look for the ''book'' called Pencil on paper!
I don't know when I'll do this so keep checking it and yeah!Thank you please review!

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You're a quirky writer, not a bad thing at all though.
I like the spunk and the kittens
and much like my self the girl that pulls herself out of bed and talks to herself
i dont care about the grammar it was good and i will read as soon as you add more

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I finally read it sorry it took so long.
the more you add to Millie the more i like her.

Posted 14 Years Ago


You're a quirky writer, not a bad thing at all though.
I like the spunk and the kittens
and much like my self the girl that pulls herself out of bed and talks to herself
i dont care about the grammar it was good and i will read as soon as you add more

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And sorry for any bad grammar issues,I'm still working on that part!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago



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