Distance

Distance

A Poem by Lizzie Jude
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My boyfriend goes to college 3 hours away and I'm having a rough time right now. The fear of losing him, the fear of being hurt. This is my way of letting it all out.

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This is all so surreal, I feel like it’s all a dream.

I replay every moment we spent together,

like a movie in my head on a big screen.

We’re apart for days on end, 

yet when we meet again it’s like you never left.

Is this distance a friend or a foe,

will it build us up or break us down?

All I know is that wherever you are,

no matter how far I will be here waiting.

Whatever distance does I pray that it doesn't change your mind. 
Because you my dear, are my most greatest find. 

© 2011 Lizzie Jude


Author's Note

Lizzie Jude
Again, newbie. If anyone has any tips/advice for dealing with this feel free to express.

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beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really like the final two lines.
So simple and yet expressive, it's all quite pretty.
I Like =)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on December 6, 2011
Last Updated on December 8, 2011
Tags: boyfriend, distance, love, relationships

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