Our Love

Our Love

A Poem by Mercury Mirrors
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This was written in the wake of the biggest fight Richie & I've ever had....I don't want to go into detail but I fixed it...& here's how grateful I am ^^. Enjoy.

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I can’t even focus enough to write!
I’ve been thinking about you all night.
We fight so much about stupid stuff,
But in the end our love is enough.
 
We may not get along exactly well,
But this is still heaven, even in hell.
I wouldn’t change a thing about you,
And I know you feel the same way too.
 
I love the way you laugh, & just your voice.
I’d listen to you talk all day, if I had a choice.
Your words from days ago still ring in my ears,
You make me feel content, & erase all my fears.
 
I feel so relaxed yet on needles & pins,
When you kiss me, I can feel my head spin.
You’ve lit a raging wildfire in my heart.

You’ll be the one I hold onto as the world falls apart.

© 2008 Mercury Mirrors


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A lovely poem! I really enjoyed this. The emotional input behind this is impressive. I loved the flow and the general scheme of it, as well as the subject matter! Really interesting and powerful. Keep up the good work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


the last line and the first two lines in the second paragraph were my favorite parts. lovely

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww. very much love inspired!
good job
jason

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ah, yes, I do hope he appreciates your understanding even in the wake of the biggest fight you have ever had. A lucky fellow indeed to find such a wonderful woman. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful!!! Oh I do hope he appreciated it. It speaks highly of a love that is strong enough to weather the pain that sometimes comes between partners. Wittingly or not. Very well written!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How you express this is beautiful..I loved it.I think your heart may have felt this way ,if not now it has,right?
well anyway it was touching, expressive and totally to the point.Congratulations on you win and God Bless!
Diana

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an endearing paradox indeed; the war that rages in the depths of one who is in love. It's a gentle flow of heartfelt sentiments.

~nicely penned~

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don't ya just love the whole love/hate thing sometimes? Sounds like you've got yourself a good one. I love the ending line, so fitting. Great piece!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nicely done. Well written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Mercury Mirrors
Mercury Mirrors

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A Poem by Mercury Mirrors



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