See me for what I am

See me for what I am

A Poem by Lola_Bee

It’s that feeling that draws  my knees to the ground

The overwhelming storm of sound

The ground moving beneath my feet

Trying to catch my heart from running away with the beat


How everyone would stare, too afraid to dare

Look into my eyes, in which they would find nine lives

Charismatic I draw you close, too close to realize

that this fantasy does not take away the stone cold truth instead

you wake upon the side of the road tattered and torn whilst everyone has fled


Silence surround you like hell above the ground

you would do anything even steal the soul of your mother

to have my intoxicating kiss running through your veins, to pretend you are another

with one kiss I take your last breath in euphoria I lead you to a hollow space

tears flow from strangers eyes, the air is cold, you ask me what’s this place

only to peek inside the casket and see your own face

© 2014 Lola_Bee

Author's Note

Not really sure what to name this piece,

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there were a lot of emotions present in this piece. the picture you used fit the atmosphere of the poem perfectly. I loved the rhyming, and the literary devices you used added even more flavor to an already tasty poem(I realize how weird what I just said sounds lol). This is an example of poetry at its finest! Good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago

It's deep, a lot of emotions there...nice...:)

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really admire the way your poems are crafted, is this poem based more on thought or emotion?

Posted 8 Years Ago

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A.D Edwards

8 Years Ago

I can relate lol keep up the good work I'm looking forward to reading your other pieces

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A.D Edwards

8 Years Ago

I have posted a new poem to the group :) plz tell me what u think
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this poem can be also relationship. i like how your words creative heavy feelings. it s very hard stuff. i like you dont forgett about beauty at life. basicaly it s nice poem .

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8 Years Ago

Thank you, i needed to go back to the past for this one

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Added on October 30, 2014
Last Updated on November 4, 2014



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