SHADOW

SHADOW

A Poem by Lola_Bee

A shadow I see when I read his words eloquently

We are not familiar, I peek inside his life through the tales that he tells

His strength is becoming

Entwined in the words, my short dalliance with imagination

 

An intriguing daily elixir

of thoughts and emotion plated to mere paper

paper that would be a muse and evoke halcyon on the eyes

as the letters unfold we realize,

how our demure souls attract the wise

 

The shadow comes and goes as the sun and the moon

Fret not, for we have a common ground and soon

his pen will hit the paper as he invites the world to dinner

Poetry Inadvertently imprinted on the souls of each of us

© 2014 Lola_Bee


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'.. The shadow comes and goes as the sun and the moon - Fret not, for we have .. '

Distance is such a lure!

Poetry in motion here, set so intelligently - warm to the eyes and ears. Temptation romps in the words: 'We are not familiar, I peek inside his life through the tales he tells..' Your phrases positively reach out perhaps to cast your own net.

Fine, fine writing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lola_Bee

4 Years Ago

Thanks emmajoy, I'm really glad you've enjoyed it. such a wonderful review.



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An interesting piece......

Shadowing the words and poems of a writer and being wondered and inspired by his/her words and thoughts on the page.

There is a longing in these words yet also a slightly menacing tone, especially for anyone who has found themselves the object of unwanted attention on this poetry site!

A nicely written poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shadows, mystery and possibilities.
"The shadow comes and goes as the sun and the moon
Fret not, for we have a common ground and soon
his pen will hit the paper as he invites the world to dinner
Poetry Inadvertently imprinted on the souls of each of us"
The world is change and possibilities. Take no chances. Know no fun. Thank you Lola for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


When one has been courted by the devil in a nice suit before, one does recognize the devil underneath its perfect fabric. Thank you for reminding me.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very well done it is obvious you thought this one through, my favorite line is The shadow comes and goes as the sun and the moon fret not.

Sincerely, Malister Mikey

Posted 4 Years Ago


The imagery in this poem is AMAZING!!! I loved the style, and the words you used in this piece are perfect. This was a great read! I'm glad I looked at this!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Perfection from the pen! Great work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Such a powerful piece of work! Great poetry :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Good writing, it's the communication between reader and writer. You could say a poem that describes what we are doing here on WC. I like this kind of view.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lola_Bee

4 Years Ago

thank you Rudi, im glad you liked it
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

4 Years Ago

My pleasure, Lola_Bee
Jaw dropping... You are An amazing writer.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lola_Bee

4 Years Ago

wow, thank you for the kind words, even though i feel far from it. im glad you enjoyed
Well thought out and expressed. A very interesting write. Valentine

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lola_Bee

4 Years Ago

many thanks Valentine, glad you found it interesting

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