Sea Queen

Sea Queen

A Poem by Lola_Bee
"

I find Solace in being with myself and the Ocean!

"
Sea Queen
 
Eternal silence of the sea
Engulfed in solace
As I proceed to hold my breath
Taking the dive
I realize, this is what It feels like to be alive!
 
Dark and unwelcoming
The Nakedness leaves my soul bare
You only appreciate Life once you've experienced despair
 
Waves explode in the silence of the night
It is a mere melody to those who embrace the dark with the light
 
I am isolated, exactly how I want to be
To many  wondering souls around me
To many wanting a piece of me
The ocean swallows me and I am a piece of thee
 
Drowning in the beauty that compliments the Sea
My spirit is finally free
My Veracity begins to scream 

As I embrace myself as the Sea Queen 




© 2016 Lola_Bee


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I love and understood this poem.
"Drowning in the beauty that compliments me
My spirit is finally free"
The above lines I try to find. Lake or sea. Places for the people who know and love the sea. Thank you Lola for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lola_Bee

2 Years Ago

thank you Cyote, always such a delightful review
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.



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that's swimming... drowning... but in a new version, swimming and drowning in silence, away from the noisy world and people, when You can be Your own self, bonded with Your inner, and free... a unique piece which obviously came from Your depth.

Thank You for sharing my friend Your wonderful personal poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful and to feel yourself free is a wonderful place to be, 🌹

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is a beautiful piece of work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


the ocean is such a vast and deep exploration, the sea Queen! Sounds so interesting! I admire the waters and the power left behind, the mystery and secrets held within

Posted 2 Years Ago


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I imagine it to be very liberating. I'm a decent swimmer but I prefer to stay above water. Diving too deep makes me feel claustrophobic. But I am so envious of friends that scuba dive. The ocean is a beautiful place, full of amazing things. I liked your poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


My introduction to your writing......

Despite the unnatural symmetry of the structure of this poem, it still exudes a sense of calm and lightness when one reads it quietly in the mind. You have used some very lovely words in this piece, with the use of alliteration in the opening lines a highlight for me.
Any poem that has a decidedly Elizabethan feel to it always is highly regarded by this reviewer, and as one who writes with that bent from time to time, i enjoyed this poem and rate it highly.

A very good piece of writing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lovely and smooth images you create with this one. I found some nice, outstanding lines. Yet...I think the end rhymes read a little too much... Maybe just my perception but those form of rhymes work better with even rhythmic stanzas, yours differ too much from each other regarding length and stress of the syllables. But I don't want to appear meticulous. All in all a nice piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


yes ..i can feel it ...the impressions of the silence and pressing of waters all around is instant ...in that silent, cold darkness one must let go and embrace the unity that is all of nature, all of the universe, all of the oceans ... beautiful sentiments Ms. Queen :) well said says i!
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love and understood this poem.
"Drowning in the beauty that compliments me
My spirit is finally free"
The above lines I try to find. Lake or sea. Places for the people who know and love the sea. Thank you Lola for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lola_Bee

2 Years Ago

thank you Cyote, always such a delightful review
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
There is among us the kingdom of the self where the possibilities remain endless.

How fortunate to find you Lola Bee, like Annabel, where they live in the sea.

Regards,
Al

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lola_Bee

2 Years Ago

Ah Alfred thanks you for the comment and popping by to have a read.

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