Oh Moon!

No you don't, you never will...

Oh moon! Do you love me?

No answers,

No you don't.

But do you know that I love you?

Love the way you shine,

Even staying in dark.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

What if the sun and moon exchanged names.. what then.. would their value, their beautiful value and meaning have such deep meaning.. A rose if smelled as sweet or ... ? Even in the dark, love shines, in fact its at its most vivid.. guidng the other nearer.. and.. nearer.. perhaps.

[Rasheeq Taheer]

To be honest, it's a matter to think about. But following my perspective, I believe everything has it's own beauty and values. So even if they exchanged their names, they still would have a meaning. And it might be deep, might not be as well. Depends on how one think. But the thing that you said "even in the dark, love shines" is so true that no one can disagree.

Anyways, thank you so so much for reading and sharing your thought :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice poem for the moon. The moon keep our secrets and light-up the nights. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Rasheeq Taheer]

Thank youu :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[revalatia]

I picture a person remaining stoic and paying no mind to thought they are the 'everything' to the person in love with them. And I dig the moon..so nice reference. Well done! :) Thanks for sharing.

[Rasheeq Taheer]

Thank you so much :)

[Namyh]

SomeoneLost - They say that after 7 million years of evolution, we only got efficiently functioning brains in the last 2 million of those. Of that 2 million, we only got around to starting civilization in the last 20 thousand of those. And of that 20 thousand, most of the major inventions of our modern society only happened in the last 200 of those, fortunately allowing me to enjoy today’s delicious pizza in the last 2 minutes of those. Kinda makes me proud to be a member of a species who walked out of a cave and onto a moon. Love ya Moon and thanks for the pepperoni. Good work SL. Namyh

[Rasheeq Taheer]

Hahaha .Thanks again Namyh. I'm really glad you liked it

[Cameron Berry]

Nice work here. Though short, and terse, you capture a longing for something you're unsure you could ever get your hands on. Yet, that doesn't stop us from loving. Nice.

[Rasheeq Taheer]

Thank you :)

[Grey Evanescent]

Simple, short yet it holds meanings a thousand words are not enough. You have beautifully conveyed your love for the person or whatever/whoever you meant for the piece.
Keep up! :)

[Rasheeq Taheer]

Thank you :)