Dear Sociaty

A Poem by Taylor

I wrote this for extra credit and found myself loving it... and soon making in a song... <3 :3

People filled with confusion
maybe life’s just an illusion
playing tricks on our minds
going through such hard times
they’re words make us so small
starting such a big brawl
society, it’s all your fault
now starting the assault

all kindness slowly disappears
spreading all these tears
tearing us all apart
starting at the heart
society your words, they hurt
trying just to convert
the good people into the bad
remembering all they had

society you will fall
maybe even run into a wall
you cannot change all
some will stand proud and tall
we’ll stop this all
before you get to Paul

your words hurt
you'll fall in the dirt
so watch your back
because karma will smack
so society, you will fall
you won’t be so tall

society we will win
and all you do is sin

© 2013 Taylor

Author's Note

Let me know what you think and if I need work...

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KeeD

It's really good, you've got talent. I like how you're addressing society like it's a person in this piece and it better watch it's back. Sends out a very positive and persevering message. Keep it up, pen on!