Silence of the Crickets

Silence of the Crickets

A Poem by LonelySoul

Silence of the Crickets

 

The Silence of the Crickets is such a lonely sound,
to the actors on the stage,it throws their hearts to the ground...
They've put on quite a show and have given you their all,
but after they perform,for them, the Final Curtain Falls...
The silence of the crickets is such a Lonely sound,
Only their own heartbeat,But a thousand faces all around...
Like the author of a poem,His love spilling upon the page,
Telling you his story,an Ode' to his Life in silent rage...
She tells you of her fantasy,Or how she's dancing 'round,
but the silence of the crickets is such a Lonely sound...
So if you read a story,hear a song, and you liked every word,
Kudos to it's  author,for what you feel and what you heard...
if it moved you in some small way,or shook the very ground,
remember The Silence of the Crickets is such a lonely sound...
LonelySoul

© 2008 LonelySoul


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nah, i'm messin. this is a good one. super-solid concept



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It so is! After hearing such tuneful song by crickets, when they fall silent, its eerie almost! You have captured that well love! xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agreed. We should all show are appreciation. I prefer it when the crickets are singing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really outstanding! I like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

outstanding write, loved it n O so true the words you speak.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

to go to a concert,and not aplaud after the performance is an insult to those who performed

Posted 11 Years Ago



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