i know when we love someone so hard ,we come to think just like one ,i know the feeling ,i love was strong its as if the minds will synchronize,you will know every thought without him telling,you will know every move without him even ever started moving ,and it gives you a wonderful feelings,like two souls in one body,what a great feelings,and what a great writing
This is beautiful in it's simplicity. It uses very elegant word choices to describe how truly loving someone always rests on the basics of truly knowing them and accepting them just the way they are. And how apt that when we really know someone, we DO know their scent, their intonations, precisely what they mean, even if they don't verbalize it. The understated feeling in this poem lends it strength. Very nice job.
I find it somewhat interesting that so much of this is physical, even when it comes to the words - the speaking. What of the inner thoughts? What of the dreams? What of the hopes, desires, fears, and all the... mind candy? I guess it is because I ate too much and am bloated right now, lol - that I am trying to detach from the physical... ;p
I have to say though, that I agree from the physical intimacy aspect - that this is indeed an intimate piece. I enjoyed reading it, and at some point at some future date - lol, I may even get to know somebody like this again...
Very passionate write... I like the almost "breathless" feel of this...as though it was truly a transcription of the very things that one's heart would say. Beautifully done.
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