enough

enough

A Poem by Loribeth215

It's not enough,

when you reach for me

and tell me,

you'll hold me

that I should understand....

 

it's not enough

to feel so much and

when I look in your eyes,

have it not mirrored back

 

to be free,

but untied,

yet still melded

to your soul

is not enough...

© 2008 Loribeth215


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Unrequited love or at least one-sided love never works and you capture those sentiments so well in this short, crisp piece.

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Added on November 29, 2008

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Loribeth215
Loribeth215

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I write poetry and stories, but you'll see more of the former than the later, as I am trying to sell several stories to online publishers. You can see many of my stories on the following websites: .. more..

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