new religion

new religion

A Poem by Loribeth215

I heard all about your new religion

how you made a monument to yourself


well big men fall hard

well little men hardly make a sound at all


I heard all about

your new transition.


You paid the price, you chose your life

But you'll live the consequence of that decision.


I heard all about your new religion,

how you thought they'd bend and fold under your precision.


Its all a lie now,

you're flesh and blood and bone like the rest of us now.


good luck

worshiping the temple of your own flesh.


what happens when they tell you

you're only human like the rest.

© 2008 Loribeth215

Author's Note

Not about an actual religion; but about someone who thinks they're perfect.

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love this Loribeth! we are imperfect in our "perfection" quest, too true!

Posted 15 Years Ago

This is awesome. Love the word choice and the flow. Really good stuff :D

Posted 15 Years Ago

Oh my god i love this. Yea i knew it wasn't about religion, which means you did a great job displaying that. Some people seriously need a freaking wake up call dont they? It reminds me of like a cocky guy who sleeps around with women haha then gets his in the end. Nice work as always

Posted 15 Years Ago

hmmm..... i like it. some people are so full of themselves.

Posted 15 Years Ago

what new religion?

anyway, another great poem (song?) I liked this and the subtle ryhme scheme made it flow nicely. good job.


Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on December 5, 2008
Last Updated on December 6, 2008




I write poetry and stories, but you'll see more of the former than the later, as I am trying to sell several stories to online publishers. You can see many of my stories on the following websites: .. more..

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