Monsoon

Monsoon

A Poem by Penny
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Reflection of my present situation

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Others wait for clouds,
I wait for you.
My eyes get wet, when it rains..

© 2014 Penny


Author's Note

Penny
Another haiku

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''I LIKE TO CRY IN RAIN BECAUSE NO ONE CAN SEE MY TEARS'' - I FOUND THIS HAIKU INTERESTING EVEN IF IT IS OF ONLY 3 LINES... SOMETIMES YOU DONT NEED TO EXPRESS YOUR FEELINGS BRIEFLY, A SINGLE SENTENCE CAN DESCRIBE THE WHOLE SITUATION...
VERY GOOD HAIKU,,
LOVED IT...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot friend. Really a heartfelt review and praise. I'll cherish it for long.

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Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

ITS BEEN A PLEASURE.... YEAH IT SHOULD BE 'IN BRIEF'... THANKS FOR THE RPLY..



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One of your best Penny...Bravo...............

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome.
Short and meaningful.
Penny

9 Years Ago

Grazie mille..
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

:)...........
I really like this, very effective! Great impact in a limited space. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

9 Years Ago

My purpose of wriying this poem is solved. Thanks for the review.
Hannah Ellsworth

9 Years Ago

Yay! No problem!
A beautiful comparison but have totally different meaning. Me also realise some tear in my eyes when rain come. Great one Sir.....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

9 Years Ago

Everyone who is human and loves rain cries when heaven open up, just that some shed tears of joy oth.. read more
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Added on June 25, 2014
Last Updated on June 25, 2014
Tags: haiku, season, rain, love

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Penny
Penny

lucknow, India



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An introvert by profession, I've developed a love for writing to express my feelings. Sadly its my only talent, wanna know from you good people if I can be a writer professionaly.I dont fit into any g.. more..

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