A Poem by JustALotusFlower

His mind was going insane.

He knew it.

Nobody else did.

He couldn't tell anyone.

They'd think he was crazy.

Maybe he was?

He didn't know.

He rarely knew anything it seemed.

He made poor decisions.

He didn't seem to care.

Dating was back into the picture.

He agreed, without reading the "fine print".

Maybe things would be better?

He didn't know.

He never did.

How could he stoop so low?

And not even think he was going to hurt her?

No. Of corse he didn't.

It didn't even phase him.

She didn't know.

She didn't know why.

He broke her heart.

Without a simple explination.

He couldn't tell her.

Could he?

Could he show her what he'd done?


It would only bring her more pain..

And he couldn't stomach that.

But she had a right to know..

And he just couldn't tell her.

Instead, he hurt himself.

© 2010 JustALotusFlower

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Aww so sweet.. Can I ask what happened? :( Btw, I lost your number, I've been wanting to call but yea. :p

Posted 9 Years Ago

Very dramatic, pulsing and driving up to the last line. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on December 13, 2010
Last Updated on December 13, 2010



Cedar Falls, IA

Darkness envolopes us all. Its the certain part of us that we cannot control. the poetic side of me is dark. you have yet to be consumed by the insanity of life, which consumed me once before. tak.. more..