The Battle

In the battle of volume 

he would always win, 

so I’d cover my ears

and cave myself in 

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

this is wickedly clever and so are you for tuning out the tintinnabulation! I find it is best (just for fun) to interject a spot of nonsense to reengage the blowhard to wasting more energy and sit back and think of something worthwhile as they bellow on uselessly

[Laura Kate]

You are so kind Robert, thank you for sharing your thoughts on this I really do appreciate it. Best wishes, Laura

[Chris Shaw]

So we have a screamer here. Someone who likes the sound of their own voice. Too right, block that din out and hear nothing. He can battle with himself. A nice bit of brevity here. Sounds like an abusive relationship.

Chris

[Laura Kate]

Thank you Chris. You're right, sometimes the best way to win is to not even play the game at all. Much appreciated, Laura.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and he speaks so loud, but says nothing that really makes sense...even to himself...he just wants to be heard...and loves to hear himself talk.
in the end those quiet ones will be the ones heard.
j.

[Laura Kate]

That is, incredibly true, what he shouts doesn't even make sense to himself. Thanks Jacob, it is nice to be heard.
Laura

[Bryad Polis Valentino]

I rather like this. Is it a personal story? Most works are. May you have a great day, my friend.

[Laura Kate]

Hi Bryad, thanks for visiting my page and for leaving your review. It is a personal story. I am planning to group a series of poems which tells the story in its entirety. I'm glad you liked this, thanks again :) Laura

[Bryad Polis Valentino]

Yw. I'd love to read it. You have a good heart. Hope to see more of your amazing work. -Your friend, Bryan

[Laura Kate]

Thank you Bryad, looking forward to reading some of your work soon!