Silver Lining

Silver Lining

A Poem by LouBelle

My iron silver lining
bolts fly in the skies
the blackness of midnight 
hides behind my eyes
my surest surprise
a guilty delight
dancing on the dunes 
whilst awaiting sunrise 
bricks of gold reflecting
sparkling, glinting rays
the hands of wind lifting
my cotton as it sways
up and up
past the orange hues of day
over the depth of darkness
silently, I wait 
taking a seat in the misty clouds
eyelids falling gently down
my silver lining
- my heavenly delight
pray you unlock your gates for me
night after night.

© 2020 LouBelle


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We all need silver linings. I don't know why but I picked up here on Stonehenge and a summer solstice at sunrise and sunset. Hues of orange and a low sun. Now that was certainly a silver lining in my book. I liked what you have conveyed here and the feelings it gave me. Thank you.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LouBelle

3 Months Ago

Hi Chris, thank you for your review. I am pleased to read that you had such nice feelings reading th.. read more



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We all need silver linings. I don't know why but I picked up here on Stonehenge and a summer solstice at sunrise and sunset. Hues of orange and a low sun. Now that was certainly a silver lining in my book. I liked what you have conveyed here and the feelings it gave me. Thank you.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LouBelle

3 Months Ago

Hi Chris, thank you for your review. I am pleased to read that you had such nice feelings reading th.. read more
This is pure awesomeness! I just love this. I wish I could write in a more whimsical way like this. You inspire me to try once again to loosen my grip on my storyline & let it float away . . . *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LouBelle

3 Months Ago

It is such a huge compliment to read this from you Margie! When I read your poems, I am blown away a.. read more
barleygirl

3 Months Ago

I don't think very much about a poem before or during writing it. Sometimes it just feels like I'm m.. read more
LouBelle

3 Months Ago

Ah - pure talent.... just as I suspected.. ;) x

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