I Don't Belong Here

Not the best i have written

I don't belong here
i have to move
somewhere where they will
allow me to be in.

I have to escape from here
Im not special or wanted
You have to let me..
let me escape from here

I don't belong here
i can't be living here
I have to escape
its killing me

Without your help
I'll die unhappy
in a place im not supposed to be in.

Reviews

[Patricia Gayle]

Awesome poem. I could really relate to it on multiple levels. Thanks for sharing.

[KatiePie]

Bleeding with emotions this piece is a captivating experience to read.
-Cathrine

[Ruth]

I like this a lot, suffocating almost, in a good way! You have expressed the not belonging really well and created a claustrophobic atmosphere!
xx

[Liz-z]

W-O-W... That was so amazingly sad... leaving me absolutely speechless... not to mention bring horrible memories back... Fantastic poem really. Oh god... Very emotional... I loved it! :)
Favorite lines:
"I don't belong here"
I love how you just go straight to the point...
"I have to move
Somewhere where they will
Allow me to be in"
If only we could really run away when we needed to huh?
Fantastic poem really! :D