Tears of Silence

A terrible silence
Breaks to my thoughts
Everytime I think
I always think of thunder storms
Horrible visions go through my head
Reflections of darkness start filling my
empty holes

As the thoughts go through
my mind,
I run away to cry out my silent tears
In a small corner
To let out all the bad thoughts,
I cry and cry my silent tears away.

Reviews

[Average person]

Simply love it.. Maybe it's because I feel it. Keep up the good work :)

[NNY]

Quite lovely. i like the line. " Horrible visions go through my head. " :)

[Ruth]

The emptiness and sadness is bought to a sdhimmering head here!
Beautifully portrayed love!
xx

[Michael Wootton]

this is good, very imaginitive, nice layout, excellent use of words. you really made me want to read more. well done :)