Leaving You

                   Dear Evil ,
            don't be ashamed
        that im going to leave you
          dont remember me
     because i will not have
      contact with you
             don't apologize
     don't speak to me ever
          whenever you say
            "sorry"
     i won't believe you
       i'll remember all the things
     you have done to me
           and soon
   you'll wind up doing it again
             and again.
 
                         Love,
          the person leaving you alone

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems or anything...just look at how the poem seems.

Reviews

[politely, polymnia]

fantastic concept! however, syntax is confusing and unclear? i think that in order to be more profound in what you're saying, a better choice of words could help you. for example; "the person leaving you alone" sounds odd. although i understand what you're trying to say, id shoot for something less wordy? i hope this helped!

[Ashley June Canfield]

This is very powerful, good job

[William]

I'm afraid I'm not very good at ignoring grammar and spelling problems, since that is the very basis of writing.
That aside, the idea is very strong, very well executed. However, with misspellings and grammar issues, you lose most the impact.