A lost Angel In The Indigo Night

I was inspired by Lana Del Rey, hint Land of god and monsters. Thought I add my own flare from the song title.

Am thoughts dec 1st

 In the land of gods and monsters

I was an angel 

Who lost her innocence 

Without even trying 

Broken like mirror baby watch out 

 Full of seven years of bad luck 

Oh deadly like the seven deadly sins 

Everything might seems fine, but heaven doesn't like girls like me 

Who were once sweet hearts that lost their f*****g ways 

I am just a f**k up dancing with the devil 

So as I lay here thinking about you, I'm thinking about how I can make you mine 

Funny thing baby you are twisted I like it and it drives me crazy

 Just make me smile already, I want to show you my wild side 

I want to blow your mind, I'm a little crazy but baby so are you 

Like Bonnie n Clyde I can be yours, You can have me if you really want

 I'm shy but it's an act like venom 

It's sweet like that, veins trembling.... vindictive like the taste but sweet 

Ahh make me smile beacuse I like you, like you so much it's insane

 I don't want to listen to the whispers, they keep telling me to look back

 Telling me I'm useless,but you make me feel free n amazing, How do you do that babe? 

How do you just make me so happy? The way you make me forget is beautiful

 Never looking back, but I'm looking back at all the sweet things you said 

You drive me wild like the waves, so lets get out of here, drive me to places I've never been 

Like you said we will, I'm being hopeful because I like this... I like feeling of being happy with hope. 

So drive fast n don't cha dare stop, lets just ride into those Santa Monica dreams 

Aslong as its me N you I promise I won't hurt you, Just take care of me Cos I bruise easily. 

So finally when were under those stars I hope it's worth it, Cos all I can do is get butterflies 

My body trembles like crazy I'm ready to go anywhere with you, I'm not usually like this but you made me happy.

You brought back my hope, but babe if we lose touch just know you'll always be mine

 If I ever leave nobody can replace our dreams, they're ours n I like you and only you 

So don't be shy boy I'm ready I can't do this anymore, I like you too much a little to much It scares me

 It makes me crazy, I'm scared n I still want you, I just don't know how you did this...

 How did you break these walls, you opened up a new me, Ah where did you come from?

 You're blessing I hope because this angel learned her lesson 

She's ready to find grace ,like Lana says heaven is a place on earth with you...... So never let me go..

-Love Always JB

Author's Note

Ignore the grammar, I hope you like it and let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

One helluva rant here... like one of those verses howling at the moon type of writes... You just let go... and break loose the flood gates with this narrative... Sounds of thunder and lightning all the way to the end...

[LoveAlwaysJB]

Safe to say I just don't want to hold back because chances are someone might relate, and I beileve when I wrote this I was up at 3am! I hope that's a good thing "sounds of thunder and lighting all the way to the end"

[Glen Yumang Manese]

They call that the witching hour... when we get our best thoughts in our minds... so they say... Good to read you...

[Justin]

Very good read. I don't normally finish reading things this long! But you kept me hooked the whole time. :) It has a pretty decent flow to it, nothing to note-worthy to say against it. So overall I'd have to say you did a good job with this, and I hope to read more of your writings soon!

[LoveAlwaysJB]

Well I am really happy to hear that, It's always been hard for me to keep my writing short and especially with so much on my mind. Yes, Flow is big for me! I hope to get better at it..... and I'll try to make soon real soon :) Thank you for the feed back! :)

[Anita Harris]

And welcome to WritersCafe! :)

[LoveAlwaysJB]

Ah thank you :)

[Anita Harris]

This is lovely. I think everyone has that feeling of doubt that they're not good enough when it comes to loving someone.

"I don't want to listen to the whispers, they keep telling me to look back

Telling me I'm useless,but you make me feel free n amazing, How do you do that babe?

How do you just make me so happy? " My favorite lines. Nice job, Jassi!

[LoveAlwaysJB]

Love can be hard, and that feeling is scary when you stop believing it because that person makes you feel amazing. Therefore you forget about all the fears and just be happy for a change!


Honestly I am so glad you liked it, means a lot! Thank you Anita! :)