I hope it rains on you.

I hope it rains on you.

A Poem by LoveAlwaysJB

"This bar has it’s charm

Like you

Yes you, boy

You drink that glass nice n slow

I wonder what gets you going

Is it the fact you would like a rendezvous?

Or is it the fact you’re broken inside?

But your friends would shame you for feeling

Oh, with me you can feel a damn thing

You can feel anything you like 

Yet, that is the wrong thing to do

Boyish wonders have you don’t they?

That’s fine by me 

I hope it rains on you so

I hope it rains on the nonchalance 

I hope the rain washes away your habits too

And when the sun comes out

I hope a new man dances in the puddles 

I hope he has the confidence to stand out

Because the man I know you could be

Is something else.”

© 2014 LoveAlwaysJB


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Added on February 3, 2014
Last Updated on February 3, 2014
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