Secret Demons

Secret Demons

A Poem by KimLove "The Beautiful Butterfly"
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The type of secrets that tear your soul apart...

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I have secret demons
I live with them night and day
They live in my head
Everytime I smile
I hear one whisper I remember what you've done…

 

I have secret demons
Who now own my heart
Everytime I start to care
They slowly  begin to pick it apart
One slightly whispers don’t you begin to start

 

I have secret demons
I try to keep at bay
Everytime I think I’m winning
One whispers
We’re not going away, we're always here to stay

 

My secret demons want to spead the truth
They care not who they hurt
My secret demons just want to be released
On the world to wreak havoc
They don’t care who they hurt.

 

As long as I never love another
They can never be released
So no tears can be shed
No love can be shared

 

I have secret demons who want to be release… to tear our love apart....

© 2014 KimLove "The Beautiful Butterfly"


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amazing work .... looks good in that font as well ...

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Powerful write Kim. Grammer check, last line:
I have secret demons who want to be release…
I believe you meant "released" ?
My demons are real, so this poem had an odd effect on me. I dare not say how real in fear I might scare my friends away...............
Because this poem spoke to me I have to say well done, this is a hard feat for anybody to do, I get tired of reading about the same old cliche's around here.
xo





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Posted 8 Years Ago


I think we all do in some respects (have secret demons)...for me the key has been mindfulness, learning to accept and befriend them with metta so that they no longer harm me with the same bite as when I was younger.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Of the demon in my view, great read!

Merci, for the review btw.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Damn gremlins haha this is so good, it articulates something Ive felt so often.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


The silent conscious - that is the secret angel, or some may argue.. But here I read it as the secret demon - When you stand by a lie, the world stands with you- when you let out the truth, you seem like the 'bad guy' and the world stands against you - so in this case the truth becomes the demon wanting to be released...

A personal perspective.. :)
I enjoyed the read! Well written.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Excellent crafting love bargained with at times..know the feeling!..Those demons can bargained with at times, great poem love xx

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Posted 8 Years Ago


let em out !
awesome work

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Posted 8 Years Ago


we all have our demons
thank you for sharing yours so aptly
don't let them stop you
it is their job you know ;)

nice write

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Posted 8 Years Ago


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BTW....if i were a Demon i would want to stay in your head :)

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Posted 8 Years Ago



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