A Deep Mark

A Deep Mark

A Poem by Love Well Spent
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This is what family means to me.

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A Deep Mark

Security, love
A true gift from above
Comfort, support
Something you can never sell short
Joy, laughter
A bothersome brother to chase after
Hardships, pain
Sometimes we lose, sometimes we gain
Near, far
It doesn’t matter where we are
Acceptance, care
Sometimes a thought, sometimes a prayer
White, brown
We’re still the same all around
Together, divorced
Love should never be forced
A meow, a bark
In my heart - a deep mark
Smiling faces, hugs that are free
That is what family means to me

© 2013 Love Well Spent


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Sounds very interesting! I`m glad to read this poem. It's very memorable ..like you captured the few moments (happiest moments) of your life in the few lyrical words. Lovely poem! I'd look forward reading your stuffs!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Hugs that are free, lovely sentiments, great and meaningful feelings come through

Posted 7 Years Ago


That's nice, yeah it is. sweetness's come down through your this writin'.
very lovely write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was really sweet. A genuine poem about family is something to be cherished.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ahh a beautiful description of what family means. I fully agree with everything in this piece. Family is a very big priority to me and my family and I have always been close (and forever will be) You did a wonderful job with this poem!
I also loved the flow this piece had, easy to read :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love Well Spent

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words! :)
Wow, one word comes to mind: sublime. Its almost musical,
Very sweet too. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love Well Spent

7 Years Ago

Thank you!! :)
Dear Love Well Spent,

I don't hear too much about this subject. I find it positive and sweet. Family to me never stops growing through the bounds of blood, but through brotherhood and love all over. It is a deep mark because things like support and love do make an important impact in one's life. I absolutely love this title. The rhythm points out the beauty of such bonds. Everything good comes from God and is a gift. I love how cherished it is in this piece.

Thanks for sharing.

Sincerely Victorious

God bless

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love Well Spent

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
haha i recently wrote something similar about what "family" means to me.. but not a poem... just a blog post... i actually dont have any idea how to answer a simple question of "what does the word FAMILY mean to you?"

Posted 7 Years Ago


family, camaraderie, brotherhood, love....these are the best things in life. i love the gentle and analytic way you chose to examine this phenom. a very passionate and loving analogy. well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love Well Spent

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :)

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Love Well Spent
Love Well Spent

Asheville, NC



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