A Poem by Layla Anne Massaro

Missing the past, everything in it.


I still remember the times we’ve spent

The magnificent memories of the past

Holding the promises that we’ve said

But now it’s enclosed by countless tears


Is it possible to return those we had?

Could it be better or just worse?

Am I girl that was horribly bad?

Just let me shout all my remorse


I miss your kiss, your hug, your smile

Loving you forever is a MUST to me

I’ve been thinking ‘bout you for awhile

This is ME loving you truthfully


Please, come back. . .I love you. . .

SO MUCH. . . 

© 2011 Layla Anne Massaro

Author's Note

Layla Anne Massaro
I know this poem is horrible, as what I said in my profile, I am not that good at writing down things so please, do not be harsh. It is just I remembered him again. I want to see him once more even for the last time.

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This was so sweeet ..it is not horible ..
and you must know that it is not important for you to be professional at writing cause poems is expressing feelings not being perfect in writing ..
so keep expressing you feeling and then you will be perfect .. trust me :)
and by the way i miss him too :(

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


A person can mispell a word ,a person can come off inapropriate but writing is a language so you keep on expressing yourself because there i promise you ,you can never go wrong..

Posted 10 Years Ago

GREAT WRITE! i feel the emotions.. you're the type of writer.. illustrate with freedom :).. In any relationship there are always trials.. so don't give up ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago

i think i get this more. i'm sorry you're in so much pain. I'd tell you i understand, but i hate when people say that to me, so i won't.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Anything so heartfelt can never be horrible. you expressed beautifully emotions that most people hide and repress. I know which way sounds healthier to me.

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is so sweet and kind of passionate too. I like this,
You tugged my heart with this write. Awesome!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Wow ! A real passionate poem - and I believe every word. You wrote it because you
felt that way ...that makes it honest and classy. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago

The poem's simple and straightforward while the emotions it poured are honest and raw. Continue writing and you'll definitely improve. Oh, and I love how you ended this. Speaks a lot. Great job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

it is not horrible...it really nice and this one is my favorite today.... ^^,

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love lost is a love that shatters a heart. I know from experience. It has a power that changes your life. I do not think this is a horrible poem. In my opinion and it is just my opinion it is a excellent expression of pain, heartache and longing.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on December 16, 2011
Last Updated on December 31, 2011


Layla Anne Massaro
Layla Anne Massaro


I am an erratic, straight-forward, amiable and amorous girl. I’ve been hurt a lot of times when it comes to love so I decided to make an account here to read some of the greatest love poems. I a.. more..


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