There is Nothing Wrong with the Four Seasons

This was actually published when i was in 8th grade.

There's Nothing Wrong with the Four Seasons

 

There's nothing wrong with you protecting me

I'm special because flowers are blooming and so are the trees

Because it is spring, you'll find no one crying

In the early morning the sun is shining

 

There's nothing wrong with you admiring me most

I am the best, but I don't like to boast

Summer here is as hot as the sun itself

In realizing I'm your favorite, you need no help

 

There's nothing wrong with you loving me

Once your under my spell you can't break free

Even though autumn has a bashful breeze

I'm telling you now you will feel at ease

 

There's nothing wrong with you missing me

The snow blurs your sight until you cannot see

While it may seem winter conceals you far too long

Before you know it, I will be gone

 

While I find something about each season alarming

You can see right away that all four are very charming

When they meet together, you just wait and see

Together they make a secret yet intereseting recipe

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Susan14]

this is awesome! i love how you described all the seasons so vividly. I love how it is written in first person, it makes it seem like each season has their own special persona. you present i outstanding creative view on each of the four seasons, and the last part really ties everything together, this is amazing, can't wait to read more of your writing.

[smiggle wiggle]

this is awesome!
i love how it is written in first person
it makes it seem like each season has their own special persona
captivating :)

[Expression]

Wow, I love this piece of work! It's very creative, nice to read, and besides that; The flow is great! Keep up the good work!

X. Expression

[Momo the Elf]

yay~ finally lol. i really like how you manage to get the season's persolanities in the poem ^^ you present an outstandingly creative view on each of the four, and the last part really ties the whole thing together. :) you are a great writer!! :D