Our Ending

Our Ending

A Poem by Lucia
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Written for the 6 word poetry contest.

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Our ending....in fire or ice?

© 2009 Lucia


Author's Note

Lucia
I know it's bad, but there is only so much I can do in 6 words.
(I like to ramble forever lol)

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I must agree with RlovesC. This is so full of meaning and interpretation. We all wonder that sometime or another. "Will this end well or not" Six words really isn't a lot, but maybe that's why I like it so much. So little words and so much to say. I really liked this. I also really liked the color to give some character and emphasis on the words. It really felt like it was emphasized if I had read it aloud. Good job! You should enter this into a six-word contest. I'm sure you will at least place. XD Keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I must agree with RlovesC. This is so full of meaning and interpretation. We all wonder that sometime or another. "Will this end well or not" Six words really isn't a lot, but maybe that's why I like it so much. So little words and so much to say. I really liked this. I also really liked the color to give some character and emphasis on the words. It really felt like it was emphasized if I had read it aloud. Good job! You should enter this into a six-word contest. I'm sure you will at least place. XD Keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is amazing, it has such meaning behind it, don't you ever say that any of your writing is bad, because it isn't, it has alot of emotion behind it, this is really good

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 26, 2009

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Lucia
Lucia

Candyland, OH



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Hello, Lucia here! I'm a girl, sixteen years old, and an (almost Junior) in high school. I am also the youngest in my family... ... Many things I enjoy are writing (obviously), reading, listening .. more..

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