Written in Stone

We are choosing out classes next week for next year. Wow, I'm going to be a Junior. Upperclassmen...spooky!

Why is it that some people can easily dream big?

Their minds as seemingly endless as the vast sky.

With tiny, faraway stars gleaming so bright.

 

How did I get in this habit of dreaming small?

My path is straight and smooth, an oddity.

While I meet no evil along my way.

 

Smiles plastered around the room;

Anxious uncertainties having no explicit destiny.

While my impassive outline stay true throughout.

Being versed can take the fun out of the journey

I foolishly wrote my future in stone

And now I can’t turn back.

Author's Note

Sometimes knowing everything is boring. [Not say I know everything] lol don't take it like that. Please comment.

Reviews

[Aldora Sparrow]

Haha. I totally agree. Some people have their heads in the clouds, but others know exactly what they have to do. Both are admirable in their own way. I know what you mean. Oh my god, I'm going to be a junior too o____0 FREAKY. Anyway, great write, as usual ;D

[Daydreamer54]

great write and it has a meaning to it. Keep up the good work! :)

[MiidniightSoul]

Ahh another beautiful poem. I like this one a lot ^___^

[Ruth]

Fate can turn around if we allow it friend. This is thought provoking :) Poppy

[Erin Lee]

wow! i hope you don't really feel this way, Lucia! you are so young and have so much ahead of you! don't be afraid to dream big! you are very talented and will go far!!!!

[Stephen Scaggs]

Dear Ms. Lucia,

Thank you for sending me the read request and thank you for your numerous reviews in the past. The topic you've chosen is interesting as it is like roads but in a different light. I do not personally believe in destiny in one sense, but I do in another sense. I believe anyone with a good heart are chosen; rain reigns on the just and unjust. Though there isn't really any rhyme or flow, it does keep the readers' attention for the explicit words you use. Though rhyme can always help the poem become better as can structure, but I believe you exercised your point. This poem could've been better, so for in that, I am a little disappointed: if you view it from a mind other than your own, I think you'd understand that you could've did better. But anyways, thank you for the read request. 'love ya. Kudos. 6.7/10.

Sincerely,
S. W. Scaggs

[Hollywood]

Dreaming big shouldn't matter as long as it is your dream. :]
Liked the poem though.